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Didn´t quite get the full shine from the midnight sun, but just enough light to illuminate the falls at the right time, would have been too late 15 mins later.

Image captured in Kvænangen, Troms, Northern Norway.
Nikon D810, 15mm. (6 shot pano)
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:iconacseven:
Critique by acseven acseven/critique/1274158669">Jul 28, 2015, 6:01:49 AM
Ok, so here's my take on your panorama, which I like quite a lot - I would say there are some things I would do to improve it.
I love the panoramic format, and this shot shows great use of it. Composition-wise I think the image should have been panned to the left. There is a very cool ellipse shaped path from the sun, through the clouds, down the waterfall, and down the river again meeting the sun. This is great stuff, mesmerizing in fact. The big issue for me is that the Sun is too near to the right side of the image. A little bit of more image to the left would improve the overall composition. If you couldn't do that, then cropping to the right would most likely balance it.
The dynamics of the waterfall are a great foreground subject. You may have considered the tree to this avail, but actually it's the waterfall that grabs the viewer and leads the eye through the rest of the shot. The tree actually is confusing the composition, but that's not too bad.
As for what I really am not fond of: excessive apparent sharpening and the use of vignetting which is darkening the image.
What do you think?
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:iconyagamiseven:
Yagamiseven Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2016
Amazing
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2016  Professional Photographer
Many thanks :)
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:iconultraiveta22desktop:
Ultraiveta22Desktop Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Well
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:iconimladris517:
imladris517 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2015
Amazing!
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:iconliveartbreatheart:
LiveArtBreatheArt Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous! :heart:
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:icona-b-elle:
A-B-elle Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The fact that places like this exist in the world just blows my mind.
You're lucky to have experienced it.
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much, I do feel priveleged to have experienced it. :)
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:iconwoobak:
Woobak Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I feel kinda bad to hear you didn't catch the full shine on time, I imagine the result might have looked more pleasing, but honestly, this is a gorgeous picture!
It somehow feels like looking into two different worlds from side to side, on one there's the iluminated side with the warm colors, and on the other is the darker side with the forest, it's very beautiful and interesting to look at!
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much. :)

Yeah, sometimes you have to do what you kind with the light provided. :)
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thanks so much. :)
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:icondaxxe:
DaXXe Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
OMGZ Amazing! :star:
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you :)
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:iconxxvladki:
xXVladki Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Where you find all these places O_O
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015  Professional Photographer
:) It is kinda funny in a way, cause almost all my images are shot withing a 5-20 minute drive from where I live, this one was a little further with 40 minutes drive.
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:iconxxvladki:
xXVladki Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
I could cry :'( My country is so ugly Q_Q
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015  Professional Photographer
Oh there is beauty anywhere
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:iconsimply-uriel-2015:
simply-uriel-2015 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful! :)
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you :)
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:iconsimply-uriel-2015:
simply-uriel-2015 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome :)
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:iconsparia:
Sparia Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015  Student General Artist
oh wow...:love::love::love:!
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you kindly. :bow:
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:iconsparia:
Sparia Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015  Student General Artist
pleasure!
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:iconsharquelle:
Sharquelle Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I love how you've managed to capture the power and the energy in the water... :la: :heart:
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much. :hug:
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:iconyagamiseven:
Yagamiseven Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015
Wow!
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015  Professional Photographer
Much obliged. :wave:
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:iconfleur-de-noel:
Fleur-de-Noel Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  Professional
Epic shot!
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you :)
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:iconfleur-de-noel:
Fleur-de-Noel Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015  Professional
:aww:
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:iconcicisartandstuff:
CicisArtandStuff Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Absolutely stunning! The foliage looks so sharp I feel like I could just reach out and touch it!
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2015  Professional Photographer
Glad you like it, thank you. :wave:
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:iconcicisartandstuff:
CicisArtandStuff Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Your welcome :>
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:iconmirmidphotos:
MirMidPhotos Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful. I think the lighting is prefect even if you didn't get the full shine from the midnight sun.
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thanks so much. :bow:
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:iconsamantha4274:
Samantha4274 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is Amazing :)
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thanks a bunch. :bow:
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:iconrongiveans:
rongiveans Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Professional Photographer
Stunningly beautiful
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much. :)
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:iconrongiveans:
rongiveans Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Professional Photographer
Stunningly beautiful
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:iconrainylake:
rainylake Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Hi there! You have been featured in my Artist Showcase box on my profile page. Feel free to go check out some of the other works that have been included with yours La la la la

Have a wonderful day :) (Smile)
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much. :)
Great selection of work you have there.

A great day to you as well. :)
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:iconrainylake:
rainylake Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
No problem :aww:
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:iconwaudrey:
waudrey Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Fantastic timing, details and composition. It's really beautiful!!
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thanks so much. :bow:
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:iconadorell:
adorell Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015
great work!
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you :)
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:icongreyscribe:
GreyScribe Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015
Panoramas like these are odd as you can't really tell exactly what is a "straight line".

Other than that, it looks like a place to visit.
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:icontrichardsen:
Trichardsen Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Professional Photographer
Yeah, depending on what angle you are shooting, with such panoramas, especialy shot with super wide angle lens, you distort the lines of reality a little.
It would be especially apparent if I have shot some buildings in the same way.

It is quite a nice place, you can pick up wood around, make a fire, enjoy the midnight sun and listen the river roar. :)
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:icongreyscribe:
GreyScribe Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
Hmm. Given the advent of actually working VR soon, have you considered making 360 degree panoramas? You'd need stereo images naturally, but I be a lot of people would like to "be somewhere else" at times... and that's way easier than actually going places. Though I do know it doesn't beat actually being there in person.
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NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D810
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
Aperture
F/11.0
Focal Length
15 mm
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160
Date Taken
Jul 17, 2015, 12:41:47 AM
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Adobe Photoshop CC 2015 (Windows)
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